Sunday, 16 December 2012

Feedback for First Draft

At the moment we are deciding on changes but we thought it would be best to allow others to give us a different perspective.


Improvements Needed-

Improvements-
The voiceover was to vague and we need to make it louder and clearer to when the soap will start.
The title screen 'Cultural Differences' doesn't work.

Positives-
The music fit the shots well.
The pace is good for a soap trailer.
We have a range of different characters.

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